Should I include the cover with the chapter?

Also, can I kindly have page 2 (the chapter index page) translated as well? I like to be thorough with those things.

>>3369
レズビアン Lesbian (can leave it as is?)
蜜の部屋 Honey Room

天使達の庭 Garden of Angels
蜜月の部屋 Honeymoon Room
プールサイド Poolside
雨に濡れた休日 Rainsoaked on a Holiday
秘密の花園 Secret Flower Garden
森の中の魔女 Witch of the Forest

So, I see nobody picked this up while I was MIA...

Sorry about that. I hit a slump of lethargy some time back, and after a bit too much time passed I also got a bit embarrassed to come back here and check if people were still waiting for this or if someone else took it... In any case, I recently decided to pull my head out of my ass and get it done. And so, here it is. Again, my apologies for the wait. Suppose I should make extra sure next time before I pick something up that I'll finish it within reasonable time...

http://sharesend.com/2yyx3ovp

• On page 2 (the contents list), the fifth entry on page 123 hadn't been translated. I used my best Google-Jutsu skills to rectify it temporarily, but please let me know what the title should be.

>>3769

>I used my best Google-Jutsu skills to rectify it temporarily, but please let me know what the title should be.

It's good like that.

page 11
An existence being used as a means for creating drawings. =>
An existence of being used as a means for creating drawings.

She isn't just there for my imagination. =>
She isn't there for my imagination.

page 15
Fine. I'll model for you. =>
Very well. I'll model for you.

page 19
You told me you wanted to draw me. =>
But you said you wanted to draw me.

page 24
Little by little, you've almost finished it, right? =>
Little by little, it's coming together, isn't it?

Once it's finished, can we still have love? =>
Once it's finished, can we still make love?

Update-y
http://sharesend.com/ysdfzrec

This game is not listed under the Game Translation section of the wiki at the moment. I would like to enquire if this is still being considered?

If so, I am interested in assisting with translation.

>>3763
Of course. There's a small problem though, I'm looking at the scripts above to upload them to the wiki, but there are some characters in them that aren't part of SJIS or CP932 like 0x8120 and 0x8f20.
They appear at the end of lines, and sometimes it looks to be mid-sentence, like they cut them off. I could just put an indicator at those spots, and the person translating them could fix them when they're working on them, but there are quite a few.

I converted the scripts to a format that I suppose can be used on the wiki:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/82e0jrw960a6ry7/scripts.rar

The first script with 4 translated lines by a5125 has the broken characters as center dots.

Not counting that script, there are 10768 broken characters (and that amount of possible broken lines). That will get really annoying, so a better script extraction is definitely needed in the future.

>>3763
Should I upload a few scripts to the wiki for you? Where do you want to begin?

>>3765
I've dumped the scripts into the wiki.

>>3765
Thank you for the haste response. I see that the files are up on the wiki, but unfortunately the text does seem to cut off at certain points. So, I shall translate what I can for now; at least until a better extraction tool is found.

>>3767
Thank you for the convenient setup on the wiki.

Translation.

This doujin is by Yoban (よばん) in the anthology "Aikatsu Dark Label" (p57-60). I don't know what the title is. It might not have one.

http://www.mediafire.com/?op2zdkph6m4183q
>>3744
Thanks.
Yeah, I actually had the same idea of checking Pixiv for the title. I couldn't find it either. I found the raws here http://haitokudoujin.com/archives/19692 (Be warned, there is also straight and futa porn here) so I just took what is said.

Yoban wrote a postscript in the anthology, but I don't think it says anything about the title.

The ellipsis on the Mm♥ at pg 3 is missing a period. Looks fine otherwise.

https://www.mediafire.com/?yicv6jmc23gjejj

TL by Procyon

>>3723 omgah! finish editing already, you guys are fast. I'm impress, going to do qc on it.

Summer days Qc:

Qc for Summer day
pg.2

"Why are they in the bathroom?">>>move up

pg.5

6th frame.
Underneath
Splash the first splash sfx there is some white brush covering the border.

That's all I was able to find, good job.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/q2o5sy743v49219

And that's all. Minor changes:

pg 176

>Fu fu... You and Senpai have the room alone, I'll be out tonight.

-> the room to yourselves,

pg 187

>Miharu-san...

->Miharu-sa—...
'Cause it's cut off in the raw as well and Itsuki uses -sama consistently at this point already.

Don't quite get the exchange between the girls on 179/180. Also not what Cameo Onee-sama's deal is, but that one is probably deliberate.

>>3659 Chapter 7
Page 146
But... =>
But—...
(second) It's fine.
No, it's fine.

The uniform was always to be kept clean, =>
School rules said the uniform should be kept clean,

and so the uniform was to be become even dirtier. =>
and so the dirtier it became the better.

Page 148
I did it, and the windows, too. =>
I locked it, and the windows, too.

Page 151
who got turned into that as punishment. =>
who got turned into those as punishment.

Page 153
We did it so much yet I'm ... =>
We did it so much, yet I'm ...

Page 155
I was really serious about you, too, =>
I'm really serious about you, too,

>>3661 Chapter 7.5
Page 165
on the outskirts of the town. =>

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will be doing qc on this one

>>3710
What? This has been released 2 months ago.

>>3711 Barely notice that X/ will do qc then for more projects.

>>3686 post final version download link here. Don't do what was just said.

>>3694
Using what service though? (mediafire doesn't like to work with my computer for some reason)

dropbox?

>>3697
Anything else?

I'll be returning to my computer in a week. I'll upload it somewhere by then.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/kirakira_toron

I don't know much the rest that needed reinterpretation, but I'm all good for "St. Michael's Academy for Girls"

Meanwhile, "環境整備" Literally means = Environmental Maintenance, which makes 環境整備委員会 = Environmental Maintenance Committee

However, I have no better suggestion (just bringing this up, in here), I'm also good for "Campus Beautification Committee" even though it's slightly a bit far from the original meaning, but not too far.

Maybe if you can give us a list of the different names, we could all pitch in for this?

>>3665
"Campus Beautification Committee" is the only proposed alternative at the moment.

>>3507
Yeah, of course.

Finished and ready for QC!

http://www.mediafire.com/download/tay11teaovdl87c/Aya_Yuri+%5BIn+QC%5D.rar

page 1
And at the climax always comes this question. =>
And at the end always comes that question.

I can reply in just one word... =>
I can reply in just one way...

page 5
I guess I have to act. =>
I guess I have to do something.

page 18
To try and make me get serious. =>
To convince my heart of it, too.

>>3526
Updated with corrections
https://www.mediafire.com/?8422218r5mf12at

Sorry, this kinda slipped through the cracks.

Most pages' upper edge are undercropped. Text centering could be improved in a few cases. Some different fonts in the raw use Wild Words in the edited version.

>>3573 ill get this trough-out the day ^^; was busy cleaning this morning...

editing finish finally it took me awhile to make all the adjustments but hopefully is ready to go...if not let me know and i'll be able to fix them right away ^^: thank you for the Qc:http://www.mediafire.com/download/5ac2gblzzcn7s8b/Yuri_Hime_Wildrose_v7_Fever+Retreat%5BYuri+Project%5D.zip

>>3577
Credits page:

"If you didn't read this story's prequel, Love Prep Room, some things might not make sense. You can find it here:"

"Once you've finished the prequel, come back to this and re-read."

>>3581
Remove the quotation mark before "Once". And you can keep the last sentence you had in, I was just too lazy to type it out.

>>3582 there finally, kept uploading the wrong one XD...there you go

>>3565
I'll edit this one as well.