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3422999 No.1962  

One-shot. 24 pages.

ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?9yn9f1qlgg6n53g

>> No.1977  

That was pretty nice anthology, despite really peculiar art style.
You didn't scan the covers?

>> No.1979  
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Translation.

>> No.1981  

>>1977

I did, here's the cover: http://www.mediafire.com/?wtlt4z6qvb1q77b

>>1979

That was fast. Thank you.

Minor QC:

Page 11.

She doesn't there for my imagination. ->

-> She /isn't/ there for my imagination.

>> No.1982  

>>1981

Missage bump.

>> No.2745  

I will edit this one. I'm surprised it hasn't been done already.

>> No.2816  

Apologies! There was a slight snafu with Photoshop but i'm nearly done.

>> No.3351  

I guess this is drop....

>> No.3360  

If it is, I can pick it up instead. I'd just like confirmation from someone.

>> No.3362  

>>3360
Confirmed.

>> No.3369  

Should I include the cover with the chapter?

Also, can I kindly have page 2 (the chapter index page) translated as well? I like to be thorough with those things.

>> No.3370  

>>3369
レズビアン Lesbian (can leave it as is?)
蜜の部屋 Honey Room

天使達の庭 Garden of Angels
蜜月の部屋 Honeymoon Room
プールサイド Poolside
雨に濡れた休日 Rainsoaked on a Holiday
秘密の花園 Secret Flower Garden
森の中の魔女 Witch of the Forest

>> No.3769  

So, I see nobody picked this up while I was MIA...

Sorry about that. I hit a slump of lethargy some time back, and after a bit too much time passed I also got a bit embarrassed to come back here and check if people were still waiting for this or if someone else took it... In any case, I recently decided to pull my head out of my ass and get it done. And so, here it is. Again, my apologies for the wait. Suppose I should make extra sure next time before I pick something up that I'll finish it within reasonable time...

http://sharesend.com/2yyx3ovp

  • On page 2 (the contents list), the fifth entry on page 123 hadn't been translated. I used my best Google-Jutsu skills to rectify it temporarily, but please let me know what the title should be.
>> No.3770  

>>3769

>I used my best Google-Jutsu skills to rectify it temporarily, but please let me know what the title should be.

It's good like that.

page 11
An existence being used as a means for creating drawings. =>
An existence of being used as a means for creating drawings.

She isn't just there for my imagination. =>
She isn't there for my imagination.

page 15
Fine. I'll model for you. =>
Very well. I'll model for you.

page 19
You told me you wanted to draw me. =>
But you said you wanted to draw me.

page 24
Little by little, you've almost finished it, right? =>
Little by little, it's coming together, isn't it?

Once it's finished, can we still have love? =>
Once it's finished, can we still make love?

>> No.3771  

Update-y
http://sharesend.com/ysdfzrec



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