Sorry for having been so quiet. Just been fixing some stuff and adding in SFX at work, haven't been going through to check it cause TBQH I'm kinda sick of it >_> Just gotta go through and read it properly one more time to make sure I didn't break anything with all the edits, there were -a lot- in s012 and s017, the former having lots of sfx to fix up and the later just having them removed entirely so added in checking from the Jp lines.
It actually occurred to me that I was in fact really, really stupid lol. I should have been searching for other instances of the same SFX (from where they were done in this one and checking in the final script for SonoHana9) and copying over the translations appropriately.
Bunch of random noises that I just left as-is. Stuff like kufuun, nfuu, kuann, hyaun, hiin, nguu, nkyu.
I'm certain I got all the double spaces, fixed all the ellipses, the remaining typos and adjusted all the parts I thought were worded a bit poorly or strangely and all that stuff. But as said, need to check again to make sure, after all the edits, that everything still fits well.
Oh and altered a few instances of lines like this: talking directly to Eris "Even if Eris says such a thing" or whatever, couldn't remember a specific example but that sort of thing bugs the hell out of me, especially being a bit too common in translations.
I'll try to read through it again to finish up.