here~

>>3555
Thanks grey, nice to see you around again.

>>3555

>page 5
>the fourth is untranslated in the last panel

ごし… - Scratch...

>>3557

yep. thanks ^^

>>3553

>you might have used normal chinacat instead of thin.

That's intentional.

>>3541

>missing sfx

To clarify: sfx I skipped because I didn't feel they're necessary but might be wrong about.

>>3541

>Procyon, please go over the missing sfx and see what should be translated.

I think the ちゅう (Smooch) would be nice on page 14 panel 3.

>>3173
What if a better scan was used?
Like this one?

>>3544
Can be found here BTW: http://exhentai.org/g/585453/b13997bbd3/?p=2

>>3544
I do have those and considered it but those scans are not really better, less blurry but butchered tones due to overleveling and low-quality jpegs.

Could make a difference for that one blurred-to-hell panel though, have to see how it looks if I just splice in the public raw version.

>>3511
Ah, okay. Then I'll just leave it as is.

>Link updated

I just noticed the smart blur basically destroyed all the texture on the color page, so I fixed that. I also threw in some random color page from the author's pixiv account, because, why not.

pg 1: Oversaturated. Haruka is supposed to be a brunette, not a redhead. Lower the black leveling a bit and if it still comes out too red-ish, use a Hue/Saturation layer.

pg 4: "Haruka." (last one) a bit up. Maybe "Haru-/ka." and size increase in both instances to make the emphasis more prominent.

pg 6: "Chihaya-chan." bit up.

pg 12: inconvinient -> inconvenient

pg 21: "Afterword" good bit right

http://www.mediafire.com/download/sz8yqn7aj8a6jee/%5BIN%20QCv4%5D%20YuriYuri%20M%40ster.zip
>>3529
I could not make her hair the right shade without altering the whole page to drastically. So I just cropped out her hair and changed the hue saturation of that. I think it came out fine.

>>3533
Yeah, that looks good.

https://mega.co.nz/#!TV5mzCjC!UF0IvhUUoeWXAI764sW1BBCQCmJnI5cryk5tG9NZ3xA

these are better scans. please, someone work on it.

>>3478

I thought Yuri Project doesn't work on futanari?

>>3479
It's a dildo.

>>3480
Oh, don't know how I missed that.

:') omg! I've been waiting for this...Weatheredpeach if you want to chat please email me at diazdotkarina112@gmail.com since my email broked down I can't used it anymmore...will check this tonight and give it a QC.
Thank you for your awesome translation again procyon

QC notes

>>3433

Thank you for the QC. ^^ I did not make any text bigger, because the text remained the same size in the raws.

V2: http://www.mediafire.com/download/shfltb61wienc2o/

Rokuroichi's art is awesome, I love it!

>>3444

Aaaand here is the last thing on the last page edited. Ready for release :D

I hope someone translate this, is good

Can someone translate it, this is the only decent neptunia doujin so far.

Thanks for the links, but how do you install the game I can't figure out how.

Assuming that you've already extracted the game, you have to mount it with some virtual image program (I recommend DAEMON tools). Then go to Control Panel, Region and Language, Administrative and change system locale to Japanese. Then open the virtual image that you've mounted and click setup.exe.
Of course, I assume that you have Windows. If not, try playing around with Wine.

Thanks for the links, I hope someday someone translate this

Is anyone interested in extracting the script from this?