http://www.mediafire.com/download/4oubcmuebs9gq49/encore.zip page 5 >4 japanese SFXs (yep, four. the fourth is untranslated in the last panel - next to Yuu's fingers) page 10 >That room is so scary...! [remove the ellipsis] >With a written curse about who discovers it! With a written curse [for whoever] discovers it! >We can't sleep like that! We can't sleep in there! page 11 >panel 3: (you might want to change the font here.) page 13 >panels 4 and 5: (can you make the font size smaller like in the raw? though not sure if it's gonna work... ) page 15 >panel 3: Nana, did you fall asleep? (how about: Nana, are you (already) asleep?) page 22 >Even more thrilling...! [remove the ellipsis] page 24 >last panel: Totally wow'd... Totally wowed...