>>5136
page 1:
アハハ = Ahaha

You mean My RUI? =>
Trying to claim she's "Your RUI"?!

page 4:
...Bo-ring. =>
...Boring-meow.

page 5:
You've been poring over them a while now, too. =>
You're looking at them like they're totally normal!

page 7:
Did you really want me to upset me that much? ->
Did you want me to be upset that much?

page 10:
But that's still fine. =>
That would be nice.

page 11:
I was thinking before =>
I was thinking about how I would have reacted in the past.

what if I could've given you the response you really wanted, Rui? =>
The me from then would have given you that jealous response you were hoping for, Rui.

page 12:
I'm jealous of all of them. ->

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https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoQ2NNY2NsT0piY0U

>>5141
On page 11, panel 1 the SFX is missing (the Japanese is already erased): フラ フラ - Wobble Wobble

Also on panel 3: サラ - Flutter

Page 14
Oops, You's last sentence doesn't work here.

Out will come, / all those things I wanted to see, / I can see directly. =>
I can / directly experience what I want / by myself.

Page 18
For better flow:

I was / being honest with you. =>
I / was being honest with you.

>>5143
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoNTc1SHlvVGhkRnc

>>5144
Thanks. Released.

Oh wow, A-Channel yuri!

A-Channel was made for yuri, but 99% of the doujins for it are het mass rape.

What a treat.

Here's a translation attempt. Really at a loss as to how to translate the title but I gave it a shot. Let me know if you'd like me to translate the long authors' messages pages at the end (21 and 02) that I neglected, though I don't think they're saying much of interest radically different from the gist of the message on page 4.

Hmm, I could give it a shot at editing this all together! Since it's been awhile since the comments have taken place, I hope I get feedback afterwards.

>>5121 sure thing :)

Translation.

Chapter 2: https://mega.nz/#!uZ5VSQKZ!mZ13bHdb4s7hnHl12erhRtaUvq_SLn03SWXjhLZ04JQ

Looks interesting, I'll do this while waiting for for a better RAW of this http://nsfw.yuriproject.net/res/2143.html

Second and final chapter: https://mega.nz/#!bNZglDgJ!WCQTUbVi4IsQr5tRLJWUdIDSnUVO6KwmyGCOk5BSKnA

Great. I'm almost done with with 3rd chapter editing, is the RAW uploader also WeatheredPeach?

By the way,is it just me or this page http://status.yuriproject.net/needs-ed.php is not very up-to-date?
I'm pretty sure I finished "Girls Picture Book ~marginal~" editing and it even already got released...

>>5097
3rd chapter is done
https://mega.nz/#!Z4Jg3DoT!eRzgJyTdfGaROh2Lra6UQv_qYGXd1kYMQ7-pEblD-uA

>>5097
The status page creates overhead and it isn't simple in design. I may try an alternative.

>>5098
Page 93
It's been so many days since my lover touched me. ->
It's been so many days since I was last touched by my lover.
(that should sound a bit less awkward.)

Page 95, middle frame
Some of the Haah SFX were erased, but not typeset.

Page 96, middle frame
The text in the double bubble should be closer to the center.

Page 97, bottom frame
empty bubble

Page 98, bottom frame
erased SFX: さわ - touch

Page 100, top frame
erased SFX: きゅ - hug

Page 101, panel 3
erased SFX: つう… - Drool

Page 102
Look, my finger ->
See, my finger
(because "Look" is repeated)

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>>5099
Ah okay no wonder. Well, it still does its job somewhat, so I suppose it's not all bad.

An alternative huh? I suppose Trello won't work since it's probably gonna be a mess there instead...

Anyway, here's the QCed version of 3rd chapter:
https://mega.nz/#!pxhWzJYY!AMljojl6P8DDxUbd6wcQLnWnvR04DVciygHE2flMims
Man, I made quite a lot of mistakes there because I was trying out new stuff on my photoshop. Hopefully there will be less editing mistakes next time!

>>5100
Released.

The Status page is on the wiki now. That should be easier for everyone.