Translation.

>>2129

Awesome, thanks~

I really wish I could edit faster.

Two ntoes:

Page 05:

"And whispers close to me ears..." -> "And whispers close to my ears..."

Page 09:

"Uuuh! As if I can say it's because it's lewd!" -> "Uuuh! As if I can say it because it's lewd!"

>>2130 haven't seen you in a long time, great to see you here. No worries editing takes time. I'll do qc

This is my first time trying to take part in a scanlation, 'bear' with me =P.

I'm hoping I will be useful and that this will be fun.

> everywhere:

All instances of 'PE' should be changed to
'P.E.' I believe.

>line 235 ( page 0063 ):

"Onee-cha~n." I'm not sure if the tild(~) is intentional of if it has a purpose here.

>line 309 (page 0065):

not sure if you want literal translations but I think the following ...
"Isn't there something off here?"

...would probably sound better when written as:
"Isn't there something a bit off here?"

>line 379 (page 0067)

"Uuuh! As if I can say it's because it's lewd!"
= "it's" -> "it"
=
"Uuuh! As if I can say it because it's lewd!"

>line 718 ( 0074 ):

"...that after you graduate, we go to America to get married ♡"

above line feels fragmented to me. Maybe "should" be inserted...? ( do we check for this? )

"...that after you graduate, we [would?/will?] go to America to get married ♡"

When reading the complete phrase it just feels like a whole contextual word is missing:
"A dream since I was little... that after you graduate, we go to America to get married".

Being that this is my first attempt at working on a scanlation I was not sure exactly how much detail I should actually go into.

I suspect maybe I went a bit extreme, by literally trying to recreate every single line that was located behind text.

I was able to manaually recreate lines and tones in most of the page were i removed text, but the semi-transparent bubble on top left would have been difficult, so that specific bubble has been made an opaque white instead - preserving it's outline and glow.

For all other content I worked on attempting to recreate exact lines and tones as they probably looked like before text was ever added.

Here is my first page example. I have not down scaled it yet.

Hopefully i didn't miss anything.

>>3989

>I suspect maybe I went a bit extreme, by literally trying to recreate every single line that was located behind text.

Yes, it's overkill. While a good way to practice, a lot of what you've spent time on redrawing will just be covered up by text again. And some things you can't just easily recreate, like that transparent bubble here. The economical solution is to set the new translated text over the old one to cover it up as best as possible and then redraw the parts you can't. That way you can (and should) preserve details like that transparent bubble while wasting far less of your time.

Some points:

• Still a bit of dust in places, check with a dusting layer.
• Pay special attention to the edges, because edging and dust there is usually hard to see in Photoshop. Your lower edge needs cleaning, the right edge needs a pixel or two more cropping
• Black leveling could be a bit less, some of the darker areas are slightly burnt out. Or they are blurred away; the blur could be a bit softer as well.

>>3990

thanks for the feedback
I hope this one is much better:

>restored left bubble
>hoping i got all ( or most of ) the dust this time.
> this version is scaled to 200PX height

existing redrawn lines retained in other areas, but will avoid repeating that process in future pages ( will wait until after whowever does TS )

>>3995

i mean 2000px height

>>3995
Still a bit of dust. Blur could be less but is appropriate for this kind of material, I guess.

monitor calibration was bad.

>>4003
One of the spots I marked is still there. Other than that, it's fine.

>>4004

my bad.

>>2072

Page 2.

Awaiting feedback in case I missed anything.

Page 3

Looks fine, good work. Just proceed through the rest that way and there shouldn't be an issue.

I have started typesetting the pages I have done so far, but I don't know what the name-tag on the light haired girl says: what her name is.

>>4025
The name tag reads 海老名 -> Ebina

Just leave out things that are missing, they'll be addressed in qc.

cool thanks.

Is this still being worked on?

>>5048 I think its safe to say its been two years, feel free to work on it if you like.

>>5049
I'll do my best and hopefully actually finish it

Made some progress. But since this is my first time doing work for Yuri Project, I tried working on few pages first, and see if it's acceptable or not.

By the way, does sound effect (non-text-bubbled SFX) have to be typesetted in no matter what? I would imagine I can work faster if I skip them, but I'm not sure if wiki guideline says that they are 100% required.

Link is here for current progress: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/sccp4wsnaoa712v/AAC487s1Ee1boLkWKNfLPjg4a?dl=0

>>5053 thanks will check it soon

>>5053 Just make sure first thing is to check your scan edges here you can crop the right side just to take that dark line, highlighted red. Other than that you seem to have great leveling, and straight pages.On page 0059 "My onee-chan is the student council president." press enter after "onee-chan" to fix text shaping on that bubble.

Finished typesetting, but I skipped the sfx for now because they take ages to redraw.

Good enough to get QC started, at least?

Link is still the same: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/sccp4wsnaoa712v/AAC487s1Ee1boLkWKNfLPjg4a?dl=0

>>5058

>but I skipped the sfx for now because they take ages to redraw.

You could do only the important ones where it's not clear what the character is doing, like sniffing. And skip SFX for sex and heartbeats and such.

>>5064
Thanks for the feedback, I added the SFX that I think is necessary.

I kinda skipped the last two pages because it's a sex scene, and adding additional SFX text without redrawing is probably going to ruin the scene.

Again, link is same as above.

>>5067
All right sounds good. If you add a credits page it should be good to go.

>>5068
Argh damn, keep forgetting the credit page -_-"
It's there in the dropbox now!

By the way, I finished fixing this one too, if you don't mind checking http://nsfw.yuriproject.net/res/2075.html

Released.

This has a sequel in Aya Yuri Vol. 2 (私のアブナイお姉ちゃん):
https://mega.nz/#!WIBl1ZiQ!hZmzbgdbawV2B-mLUpVEduLmsyuXGxzNTySkd58SWp8
If you're interested I'll translate it too.

>>5078
And another sequel in Aya Yuri Vol 3. (私の愛しいお姉ちゃん):
https://mega.nz/#!PFJACBoQ!DY3jaHRBgECgv3Jc4sY-DRQKo2wMH5hI0Muc7DDAnDA
I don't have other volumes raws.

>>5078
>>5079
YES and YES.
I'm big fan of Mira, so that's a definite yes!

... As long as it hasn't been translated, that is.

>>5080
All right, great. I don't think it's been scanlated before.
Here is the translation for Story 2.

>>5076
page 16, panel 3

>That after you graduate, we will to America to get married.

That after you graduate, we will go to America to get married.

>>5082
Thanks for catching the error.
Procyon, if you want to fix it, get it from my dropbox, I've already fixed it.

>>5081
Sweet, I'll get on it soon. Do we need a new thread for it?

>>5083
I updated the Mega link.

It's a small series so this thread is fine.

>>5080
Chapter 3 (last one of the series).

>>5089
Thanks! I'll be done editing the 2nd chapter soon hopefully, since I just finished cleaning the pages and all that's left is to typeset them.

Hey I'm finally done with editing chapter 2:
https://mega.nz/#!dxQgDJKJ!n4ek_4WWZo8MOqcgJq4NhQ5IKFy8FH_P285xEoZ9_Ok

>>5092
Page 2
that was away beyond Senpai-Kouhai ->
that was way beyond Senpai-Kouhai

Page 3
You looked cute when jealous
You look cute when jealous

Credits:
Raw provider is WeatheredPeach.

>>5093
I've uploaded the pages that needs fixing. Should I upload the whole thing next time?
https://mega.nz/#!l4xn2SxA!ZiCavB-1YEWZ_8Qq7x4RwewyXeVuEGVTPhaoU5CG160

By the way,

>You look cute when jealous

I still find that sentence lacking a bit, so I changed it to "You looked cute when you're jealous" in the recent fix, if you don't mind

>>5095
All right, sounds good.

>Should I upload the whole thing next time?

Either way is fine. You could also use the thread if it's just a few pages.

Released.

Great. I'm almost done with with 3rd chapter editing, is the RAW uploader also WeatheredPeach?

By the way,is it just me or this page http://status.yuriproject.net/needs-ed.php is not very up-to-date?
I'm pretty sure I finished "Girls Picture Book ~marginal~" editing and it even already got released...

>>5097
3rd chapter is done
https://mega.nz/#!Z4Jg3DoT!eRzgJyTdfGaROh2Lra6UQv_qYGXd1kYMQ7-pEblD-uA

>>5097
The status page creates overhead and it isn't simple in design. I may try an alternative.

>>5098
Page 93
It's been so many days since my lover touched me. ->
It's been so many days since I was last touched by my lover.
(that should sound a bit less awkward.)

Page 95, middle frame
Some of the Haah SFX were erased, but not typeset.

Page 96, middle frame
The text in the double bubble should be closer to the center.

Page 97, bottom frame
empty bubble

Page 98, bottom frame
erased SFX: さわ - touch

Page 100, top frame
erased SFX: きゅ - hug

Page 101, panel 3
erased SFX: つう… - Drool

Page 102
Look, my finger ->
See, my finger
(because "Look" is repeated)

Page 105
It was in jest ->
It was a joke

Page 106
Spread (smaller, different font)

Page 107
Slippery / from the soap... ->
Sliding / with the soap...

>>5099
Ah okay no wonder. Well, it still does its job somewhat, so I suppose it's not all bad.

An alternative huh? I suppose Trello won't work since it's probably gonna be a mess there instead...

Anyway, here's the QCed version of 3rd chapter:
https://mega.nz/#!pxhWzJYY!AMljojl6P8DDxUbd6wcQLnWnvR04DVciygHE2flMims
Man, I made quite a lot of mistakes there because I was trying out new stuff on my photoshop. Hopefully there will be less editing mistakes next time!

>>5100
Released.

The Status page is on the wiki now. That should be easier for everyone.