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p7:
flag: Rena saying "thanks for the meal" sounds odd given that she made it, though reading up on 'itadakimasu' I guess it makes sense for Japanese culture.
error: "...so doing fine" -> "...so I'm doing fine". Unless the idea is deliberately that she's speaking sloppily.
p10:
flag: I would say "and it looks like...", but I guess dropping 'it' works for casual speaking.
p11:
flag: I wouuld say "anyway", not "anyways", but this might be my dialect.
p12:
error: "whats" -> "what's"