This chapter gives a whole new definition of sleeping together...

Will get started on this

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1ebLqhn5Ej35gguCIrjfhj_nT_JLUcFzv?usp=sharing

Not gonna lie, the stuff about the kyuu ranks was kinda confusing. The ranks start at 6 or 10, advance to 1, then advance back to 10?

>>5790

Yup. Funky system. But standard in Japanese martial arts/cultural arts.

>>5790

p7:
flag: Rena saying "thanks for the meal" sounds odd given that she made it, though reading up on 'itadakimasu' I guess it makes sense for Japanese culture.

error: "...so doing fine" -> "...so I'm doing fine". Unless the idea is deliberately that she's speaking sloppily.

p10:
flag: I would say "and it looks like...", but I guess dropping 'it' works for casual speaking.

p11:
flag: I wouuld say "anyway", not "anyways", but this might be my dialect.

p12:
error: "whats" -> "what's"

>>5799

Made all the corrections! Thanks for catching them!