A QC for Rainy Holiday is available here: http://www.mediafire.com/download/nf1m7pty2w7rbkb/Rainy_Holyday_QC1.zip
The present QC-version is not as finished as I would like it to be, but since I will have nigh on no time available to fix the remaining details until September, I figured that it would be nice to perhaps by then also have some feedback related to the parts I consider to be in a more "finished" state.
Some background: I did most of the cleaning of "Rainy Holiday" more than a year ago, in fact before I got the first feedback on "Poolside" (the prequel, http://reader.yuriproject.net/read/lesbian/en/2/4/), and I started working upon this project again after "Poolside" was released.
I have tried to update/improve the initial draft based on the feedback I got during the QC-versions of "Poolside", but I have had a hard time dealing with some of the SFXs. The problem is that my first attempt at creating SFXs was based on the strategy "cover the original SFX to reduce the amount of redrawing". This implied that most of the SFXs I
made last year did go in all kinds of strange directions, which I have understood is far from desirable.
I thus need to do some extra redrawing in order to replace the crappy SFXs with proper versions, and I've not had the time/energy to fix the following SFXs yet.
89: VSSSH
90: VSSH
101: VSSSSSSSH, DRIP, DRIP
102: VSSSSSSSH, VSSSSSSSSSSSH
104: VSSSSSSSH, VSSSSSSSH
105: VSSSSSSSH
106: VSSSSSSSH
107: BRRRRRRR, VSSSSSSSH
108: VSSSSSSSH, VSSSSSSSSSSSH
109: RUMBLE, JOLT, FWOOOOOOOOM
111: RUMBLE
120: VSSSSSSSSSSSH
121: VSSSSSSSSH
These SFXs are mostly related to the sound of rain and thunder, and as such I wonder: Might it be OK to allow a few of these SFXs to go in "wrong" directions compared to how they ideally should be placed?
In addition to the SFXs mentioned above, I would also like to point out that more work is needed on the front page - i.e. redrawing the region where the original title was located.
By the way: I have noticed that there's still two untranslated chapters from this collection, i.e. http://nsfw.yuriproject.net/res/1966.html and http://nsfw.yuriproject.net/res/1969.html. I think I would like to edit those too if someone can provide translations. They seem to be a bit easier than Poolside and Rainy Holiday, at least with regard to having fewer SFXs, and less complicated background to redraw for those SFXs that are there.