Is someone living in east coast of USA? Are you OK?
>>1871
I can't feel the deference between the two names. I can only say Sonohana (2006-) is clearly refer to "Lillian Girls' Academy" (Maria sama ga miteru 1996-).
I continue TLC.
s010 - s016:
I found no subject-object exchanged. Perhaps translators are tired in last 2 segments..?
> - <7AA7> 「親ã¯é€±æœ«ã€åœ°æ–¹ã§å…¬æ¼”ãŒã‚ã‚‹ã‹ã‚‰ã€å®¶ã«å®¶æ—ã¯ã„ãªã„ã®ã§ã™ã€‚ã‚ãŸãã—ã¯ã²ã¨ã‚Šã£åã§ã™ã—ã€=「My parents are going to be at a show in the country this weekend, so I'll be all on my own.ã€
so I'll be all on my own. -> and I'm an only child.
> - <8B3F> 「銀盤ã®å¦–ç²¾ã®ã‚ˆã†ã€‚貴女ã®ç™½ã„è‚ŒãŒã€ã‚ˆã‚Šç™½ã見ãˆã¾ã™ã‹ã‚‰ã€=「You're like a fairy from a frozen lake. It makes your white skin seem even paler.ã€
# 銀盤ã®å¦–ç²¾ means figure skaters usually, and sometimes the word means only Janet Lynn, Sapporo Olympic bronze medalist.
# http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Janet_Lynn
# How to translate.. is it better to leave as is ?
> - <EAA6> 「姫始ã‚ã€=「"First time".ã€
# meaning is "First time of new year".
nothing♪
# Hanafuda card game's terms are like magic spell, but in SH8 it's ok.
# In SH10...many old childish games ...maybe headache.
#for reference :-)
# Please image bridge, poker or mahjong.
# In this scene, probably they open the hand each other (or at least Eris open).
# *inosikachou : 'boar-deer-butterfly'
# *sanko : 'three-lights' likes three-card of Ace.
# *hanamizake : 'Cherry-blossom viewing' = A card "with a lot of cherry blossoms" and a "sake cup" card.
# Shizuku already exposed "hanamizake" to field, then Eris can not get the "a lot of blossoms" card.
# The "a lot of blossoms" card is one of "Ace" that Eris needs to make "sanko".
>- <4C17> 「ã˜ã‚ƒã‚ã€é›«ã¨ãˆã£ã¡ãªã“ã¨ã‚’ã—ã¦ã‚‚気付ã‹ã‚Œãªã„ã‚ãã€=「Oh, so they wouldn't notice if I had sex with you.ã€
# ãˆã£ã¡ãªã€ã“ã¨ã‚’ã™ã‚‹(do something erotic/naughty) ≠ãˆã£ã¡ã™ã‚‹/ãˆã£ã¡ã‚’ã™ã‚‹ (slang: have sex/make love)
test
-> if I did something erotic with you. (...It's not natural I know ...)
>- <5B1D> 「ã„ã¤ã‚‚æ€ã†ã®ã ã‘ã©ã€ã‚·ã‚ºã‚¯ã¯å†·ãŸã„ã‚ã€=「You're always so cold, Shizuku.ã€
-> I always think, you're cold, Shizuku.
# Eris didn't say 'Shizuku is always cold', I think.
>- s013 <39ED> ç´ æŒ¯ã‚Šã®ç·´ç¿’。=Time to practice how.
-> I exercise swing of my arm.
# ç´ æŒ¯ã‚Š= 1. (SOBURI) behavior/attitude. *2. (SUBURI) Practice swing of the bat/sword.
-s014
> - <7873> 「霧島ã•ã‚“ã‚‚ã€å°‘ã—休んã ã‹ã‚‰å¸°ã£ã¦ã„ã„ã‚よã€=「Once you've rested, you can head back, Kirishima-san.ã€
-> you can go home
# I wonder which is better 'you can head back' or ' you can go home'
# It is related to below comment (Deltacake-san?). It is Sonohana writers' lack of knowledge, I think. but how to translate? They make love just after this.
##- <73F9> 「貧血……ã€=「Fatigue...ã€
##It has always been bothering me that "貧血 (hinketsu)" is always translated as anemia. Anemia is a serious medical condition caused by a low RBC count or low hemoglobin levels. I think "hinketsu" in its most common usage mostly refers to lightheaded-ness caused by stress or hunger, so fatigue would be much more appropriate.
# And I suspect å°‘ã—休んã ã‹ã‚‰ is mis-input. -> å°‘ã—休んã ら or å°‘ã—休んã§ã‹ã‚‰-> You get some rest and you can go home ...
> - <A69E> 「エリスã®äº‹ã¯ã€æœ¬å½“ã«ãŠæ…•ã„ã—ã¦ã„ã‚‹ã®ã«ã€æ°—æŒã¡ã‚’上手ãä¼ãˆã‚‰ã‚Œãªã„ã‚“ã§ã™ã€=「Even though I really want to show that I love you, I can't convey my feelings properly.ã€
->Even though I really love you, I can't convey my feelings properly.
#ãŠæ…•ã„ã—ã¦ã„ã‚‹ is simply 'I love you'. ...the issue of expression?
> - <789D> 「シズク……ã‚ã‚ŠãŒã¨ã†ã€è¦ªåˆ‡ã«ã‚‚程ãŒã‚ã‚‹ã‚よã£ã€=「Shizuku... thank you, you're so kind.ã€
#is the previous sentence supposed to sound weird?
#I think it has a couple of grammatical errors, but I'm not very sure.
## The comment is correct. **ã«ã‚‚程ãŒã‚ã‚‹ means 'It is too bad about **'. This idiom is only used for bad thing (There 's proximity to the **).
## So, next sentence Shizuku says <794C> 「ã©ã‚“ãªæ—¥æœ¬èªžãªã‚“ã§ã™ã‹ãã‚Œã¯â€¦â€¦ã€=「What kind of Japanese was that...?ã€
## It's Eris's joke or emphasise.
> <24C7> 『シズクーã€=「Shizukuu.ã€
> - <2552> 「ã—ã°ã‚‰ãã“ã®ã¾ã¾ã«ã•ã›ã¦â€¦â€¦ã€=「Just let me stay like this...ã€)
> <25F0> 『ã“ã®ã¾ã¾ã£ã¦â€¦â€¦ã€=「Like this...ã€
> <2682> 『ãµã…む……ã€=「sighã€
> <270E> 『分ã‹ã£ãŸã‚ã€=「All right.ã€
# 『ã€kagi-kakko displays Eris' voice is heard through the futon.
# If 『ã€is allowed, 『〠is better.
# There is no voice but 「〠, is it okay for game system?
<24C7> 『シズクーã€=『Shizukuu.ã€
- <2552> 「ã—ã°ã‚‰ãã“ã®ã¾ã¾ã«ã•ã›ã¦â€¦â€¦ã€=「Just let me stay like this...ã€)
<25F0> 『ã“ã®ã¾ã¾ã£ã¦â€¦â€¦ã€=『Like this...ã€
<2682> 『ãµã…む……ã€=『sighã€
<270E> 『分ã‹ã£ãŸã‚ã€=『All right.ã€
>- <4CFF> 「ã¡ã€ã¡ã‚‡ã£ã¨ã€ã©ã“å¸ã£ã¦ã‚‹ã‚“ã§ã™ã‹ï¼ã€=「W-Wait, where are you sucking?!ã€
>- <4DA5> 「シズクã®å¼¾åŠ›ã‚ã‚‹ãŠã£ã±ã„ã€=「Your bouncy boobs.ã€
>- <4E40> 「誰もå¸ã£ã¦ã‚‹å ´æ‰€ãªã‚“ã‹èžã„ã¦ã¾ã›ã‚“ã£ã€=「I've never heard of people sucking that place.ã€
>- <4EE6> ã€Œå ´æ‰€ã‚’èžã‹ã‚ŒãŸã‹ã‚‰ç”ãˆãŸã ã‘ãªã®ã«â€¦â€¦æ—¥æœ¬èªžã£ã¦é›£ã—ã„ã‚ã€=「You asked, so I answered... Japanese really is difficult.ã€
# <4E40> meaning 「No one ask you the place you're sucking!ã€
# (<4CFF> Shizuku's meaning 「Stop!, what are you doing?ã€)
# The meaning can be red as is?
test translation
- <4CFF> 「ã¡ã€ã¡ã‚‡ã£ã¨ã€ã©ã“å¸ã£ã¦ã‚‹ã‚“ã§ã™ã‹ï¼ã€=「W-Wait, where are you sucking?!ã€
- <4DA5> 「シズクã®å¼¾åŠ›ã‚ã‚‹ãŠã£ã±ã„ã€=「Your bouncy boobs.ã€
- <4E40> 「誰もå¸ã£ã¦ã‚‹å ´æ‰€ãªã‚“ã‹èžã„ã¦ã¾ã›ã‚“ã£ã€=「No one ask where you are sucking!ã€
- <4EE6> ã€Œå ´æ‰€ã‚’èžã‹ã‚ŒãŸã‹ã‚‰ç”ãˆãŸã ã‘ãªã®ã«â€¦â€¦æ—¥æœ¬èªžã£ã¦é›£ã—ã„ã‚ã€=「You asked, so I answered... Japanese really is difficult.ã€