http://wiki.yuriproject.org/amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu

My impressions may be skewed, but are these two the least popular pairing or something? I completely don't understand.

Guess I'll go for it. Gonna need some help with the onomatopoeia, though.

>>784
I think that would be Yuuna/Nanami. Not that they are disliked or anything, but the games have improved a great deal since the first game, so it's easier to favor other couples.

>>784
http://thejadednetwork.com/sfx/ and http://www.nihongoresources.com/dictionaries/onomatopoeia.html are listed in the wiki as references for onomatopoeia. The most common reason given for their low popularity is the controversial nature of their relationship in Western eyes, but this has not been an impediment to the success of products featuring them.

This is to acknowledge that one and a half pages of this script has been translated on the wiki.

This is to acknowledge that Joe0Bloggs has begun translation of this visual novel, starting with s003.

>>1081

Considering how 6 worked out, perhaps it's best if Joe0Bloggs takes over, especially since I'm procrastinating this too much.

AXYPB,
I started on ch.4, the first untouched chapter, not ch.3, which akbjker was working on.

akbjker,
I won't be doing this one nearly as fast as SH6, as RL has gotten a lot more busy. I'm sure you'll have plenty of time to finish your ch.3, and we'll see if we can help each other out for the rest of the chapters :)

Alas, I don't think I'll be making progress on this one anytime soon. Don't let me hold back anyone who wants to translate this.

In the event that the wiki goes offline, I keep my local copies of the script on Dropbox at https://www.dropbox.com/sh/el63io35ah91owa/ACh2agDIBS/9

Unfortunately I can't read a single kanji but I'd really like to contribute at least a few bites ... soo maybe if there's graphics editing that still needs to be done (or for Platinum) pls let me know

>>2056
If you want to help with graphics, you can edit the text out of the ending credits for both visual novels. I will provide the translated text myself.
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?xwv4ocq2aft10so
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?piytp8akckc6wev

ok, firing up PS ..... now ^^

I'm done with the end credit pics and I also took the liberty to decensor the event CGs and character sprites.
But I don't know if you actually want decensored CGs for these releases or not ...

A quick reply would be nice so I can move on to Platinum (w/o wasting time on unwanted details).

>>2061
I would rather you focus on the more important task of the ending graphics for Lily Platinum.

If you'd like to decensor event graphics after the fact, it can be done for all prior visual novels as well. If you are willing to put forward the effort, I could in theory produce optional graphic patches using your decensored image data, but there are possible infringement issues with doing this. I'd like Saluki's opinion on this before I consider this.

I'd totally agree, wouldn't the ending graphics for Lily Platinum be finished sometime tonight as well.
And since I'm no translator there's nothing left for me to focus on.

I wouldn't mind decensoring the older VNs. Shouldn't take me more than two weeks once motivation kicks in again^^.

I'll upload a sample a little later so you can see whether the quality of my work is worth dicussing the matter ...

Over time I found quite a few translation sites/tools which -combined- gave me usable translations.
Yesterday I tried a few lines from SH and the results were surprisingly close to the translations in the wiki.

[ When I translate anime subs from english to german I often use machine translations of japanese subs as reference... which speeds up the process a lot.]

So I was wondering if some of the translators would find having a -refined- machine translation usefull ...

... cause this would open up a new way for me to contribute to SH9-xx

Post some examples?

What are you referring to, anon?

@ AXYPB! & Saluki

I'm ready to upload the end credit graphics for SH9+10.
But since Platinum uses two censored event CGs for the end credits I'd like to know whether you've already discussed the use of decensored graphics or not ...

>>2089
We still have not yet discussed anything yet.

If you have time, I would like for you to edit the credit graphic sr02 for each of the first eight visual novels. For those translations, I recreated the ending images wholesale by copying the matching event images and matching the color changes as closely as possible as this was less effort than removing the text directly for me. However, I was not able to do this for the first images in each credit sequence, which are closeups that I cannot accurately reproduce.

No problemo, but I don't have any of the old CG sets. If you can point me to a site where I can dl them ... or maybe u could re-up them yourself?

>>2100
The CG sets should all be on Listless Ink

So I'm giving this my best shot (been studying Japanese by myself for 4~ years now) and I'd just like some input on some phrases that I honestly haven't heard before.

「こうやって弄ると、相性バッチリ、愛は永遠なんですって」

I translate that as something along the lines of "If I touch you like this, it fits just right (just right compatilibity?), they say love is forever."

I know I'm headed in the wrong direction here so could someone with more experience explain that phrase a bit?

>>2102

Something like "Apparently, if I touch you like this, then our compatibility will become perfect and our love will become immortal"

Incidentally, I download the scripts and translate offline, so please tell me which parts you're planning on doing so we don't clobber each other's work.

>>2103

I see, so the って　at the end basically applies to the entire sentance, as if she's talking about a charm (makes sense know what she said previously)

As for my plans, I just figured I'd translate whatever's not translated. Maybe we can work something out? My name on the wiki is Darkholme. Going to bed now, though.

>>2104

Well, you should always start with the first untouched script like Joe0Bloggs did. That way, you can avoid conflicts with stupid people like me who don't immediately publish their work.

So in this case, script 9, since I'm almost done with 8.

>>2105

Yeah, I can see you're moving pretty fast with 8. I'll hop onto 9, then.

http://wiki.yuriproject.org/amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu:s009

I finished script 9 and added some comments here and there. Some parts need some checking as they didn't make any sense to me in context.

>>2118

Are you planning to move on to 10 anytime soon?

>>2119

I'll probably get on 10 tomorrow, but if you want to take 10 now I'll move to 11.

>>2120

Go for it, I'm busy... procrastinating.

>>2097

I've edited the sr2 files for SH1-6. 7&8 were fine (reused title cg).

http://www.mediafire.com/?cd15gob3v1ddsbv

>>2131
Thank you.

Can you upload PSDs as well? And do you want a credit for graphics in future releases?

>>2150

I do have some of these CGs stored as .pspimage files as well (I use my old (t)rusty Paint Shop Pro x2 for most of the cg stuff I do).
But in this case there aren't any fancy layers etc...
Once I've edited an area of the cg I merged the layer with the background/original and moved on w another area...

But if u just want the uncompressed graphics I can upload them no problem.
---------
Well, since did do a big chunk of the editing part that would only be fair imo.

Which reminds me ... I still have to upload the CGs for 9 and 10. ^^ I'll check them one last time and ul em next week.

The lastest games dont seem as good as the first but thats what I think. It seems they have changed directions since the start.

This is to acknowledge that s011 has been translated on the wiki.

The wiki page for this visual novel has been relocated to http://wiki.yuriproject.net/wiki:amakute_otona_no_torokeru_chuu.

>>2156
Have you completed work on the sr02 files for the latter two visual novels?

can we get an update on the progress, please

>>2700

Going through it slowly. Prose is still a daunting task for me. I hope I can pick up the pace soon.

>>2131
Translation for this visual novel is nearly complete. Please edit sr02 for the remaining two visual novels.

The first draft translation is now complete. Congratulations to all who contributed.

Translation check for all scripts is now required, particularly to keep the terminology consistent. In the meantime, I will begin work editing graphics. However, I will request that a graphic editor erase the text from s002.

Editors: Several conventions have changed since this thread was open. In particular, the full name of the school is "St. Michael's Academy for Girls".

I am... miraculously done. Somehow. Well, at least with a very liberal definition of "done". @fkeroge will probably come after my head after seeing all the TLC requests I put in.

This was pretty fun, actually, since the script is actually pretty damn good. Probably why I never dropped it even though I stalled for months at a time.

The funny thing is, I only meant to occasionally work on this so that when a "real" translator came, he wouldn't have as much work to do. Obviously that real translator never came, leaving me scratching my head and finally getting around to finishing this in one go. Amusingly, my first few scripts are noticeably more awkward to read. Looks like I improved a bit too while translating this. I should probably go over them again, but I'm too exhausted... Oh well. I'll see what @fkeroge has to say.

Also a heads-up: I have no idea where the choices are, so watch for awkward breaks in conversation flow at those points when playtesting.

>>2896
To aid in editing, I compiled an MSD with the scripts on the wiki as of today. It has not been checked for errors or compatibility and is only meant to help editors determine context and speakers. I will update it regularly or if it causes crashes. Please remember to keep a backup of your MSD before using this one.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/4n023heced7pj8h/MSD9_test.zip

i actually was middle of translating chapter 10 cause it has been awhile since it had been updated. good to see that translation has been finished :)

haven't been here for a while and it seems my dl links for the #9 #10 pics are down.
Sorry for that.
I'll re-up them today.

@ AXYPB!AXYPB9jMfU

I zipped my entire work folders for 9&10 so I wouldn't miss any altered cg.
Included are also my de-censored character CGs and two h-scenes.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/h2gjfp23ftw8663/Sono_Hanabira_CG_Sets.rar

And the SR2 overhaul for SH1-6 in case u didn't grab my first upload.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/cd15gob3v1ddsbv/sr2_SH1-6.rar

>>2924
Thank you very much for your work. Feel free to continue your decensoring effort with the other titles if you have time. However, I will be unable to host them on my own server, so they will be hosted here on completion.

In the meantime, as translation projects have been launched for the Yurin Yurin releases, I'd like for you to also edit the credit graphics for them. There are six sr02 files for Maidens of Michael.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/8lkx6s5w5b29k06/XP3_set.zip

>>2927
No Prob. Already on it.
#12 and #13 are finished and I just openen the first pic for #11 in PS.

After that I'm going to decensor the character sprites.
Is it possible on this board to start a poll?
Would be interesting to know whether people think the girls should have pubic hair or not.
I mean these girls are japanese and except for Runa it's quite improbable that they're all completely bald.
Just a thought.

>>2929
My opinion on that matter is that they don't appear to be present in the original artwork, so adding it may require more effort than is warranted.

Also notice that I included the title screens for the latter two visual novels; no clean images of them without the logo exist. I trust that you have accounted for this.

>>2932
As I said, it was just a thought. Decencoring alone is a lot of work (and I don't know if I'll have the time for that).

Not sure I get what you mean by that. This wasn't the first time without a clean event cg as source for missing bits.

Here's what I did with the title pics for SH12 & 13.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/yaco5qocul0o1lu/12_13.rar

MoM will take a bit longer. Two done, currently working on the third of the six cgs. Lots of little details to reconstruct.

>>2935
Thank you for including the ribbons in the title screens. It saves me the time to reconstruct them myself.

I meant that no official artwork depicts pubic hair on any of the characters, even on the most minimally censored graphics. As reconstructing the censored regions is already a time-consuming task, adding additional details should be secondary to it, possibly as a variant.

I finally finished the SR2s for MoM.
Man, why do they always have to place the text over hair or hands ^^.
The decencored character sprites for all 13 VNs should be finished til the end of this week.
As for the h-CGs ... we'll see.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/fzw9ar6g3157fo3/%2311_MoM.rar

Awww... poor Nanami

keep up the good work all! :)

I just finished editing/decencoring SonoHana #1 feat. Nanami/Yuna.
Way more work than expected ... some pics I had to downright dissect in order to fix the obvious anatomical and perspective flaws ... but I'll keep going.
Since the translation for this title seems to be finished for the most part, I'll work on "Grown up kisses" and "Lilly Platinum" next.
Editing a complete CG set should take me no more than two weeks...but in case you need specific CGs for a beta release just let me know.

>>2960
An update for My Dear Prince will be released tomorrow, so I suggest that for your next project. Can you post your edited files, and are there variations with and without the hair? I can create a dedicated patcher program for the decensored graphics based on my Message Window Mod.

"My dear prince"...wow...that's unexpected.
But ok.
As for the hair, yes it's optional. I created the hairy bits on seperate layers.
I'm still working on two non-h-scenes of SH1 cleaning the lineart and some wheird shading.
I'll post a dl link tomorrow.
Guess I should stop hijacking this thread and create a new one just for SH graphics editing stuff...

Nice work, everyone. Sorry I haven't been able to contribute much for this recently. Real life is being a pain. However, I did manage to get TLC and editing done for the scripts until halfway through sr007 a few months ago. Just a heads-up.

I finally got enough time to finish up work in Amakute Otona no Torokeru Chuu. As far as the translation job is concerned, I'd have to thank the translator for making my job easy. I'll start working on Lily Platinum ASAP.

>>3179

Heh, thanks. I don't really see a lot of raw translations, so I have no idea how good I am comparatively.

If it's alright with you guys, I'd like to have my name changed in the credits from @fkeroge to Lucas Magnus. I use that name more often now, and @fkeroge's kinda obsolete.

I've started working on Lily Platinum and I'm halfway done through the translated scripts. I'd help translate the rest, but I'm afraid I might not have the time for that.

>>3199
Thank you very much for your work. I'll review the scripts myself as soon as I am able.

I've posted an edit of s003, but there are many lines that need revision. I would like for a second editor to rewrite the awkward sentences in the love scenes.

Will this VN ever be finished?
Update pls.

>>3416

I have free time coming up this holiday, so I could help out with that. I would definitely like to see this done by the end of the year!

Hey guys, sorry to bother y'all. Is there much progress being made on the QC'ing?
Thanks for the hard work :)

If QC continues at the current pace we will see the release at the end of the year.......2016

>>3566 Trying to insinuate something will not make the QC process faster. I'm sure that could happen.

Release this game at 2016.

I´m just saying, skip the freakin QC and just release the patch as it is.
Or let somebody else do it, 6 months for a ~3 hour game is simply ridicules.

>>3625 Well, that's not my decision. However,

AXYPB-san, do you know of some scripts that has notes/comments that needs final checking for the game to pass through and get released?

>>3626
Scripts s004-s015 are in need of review. Once they are cleaned up, I can produce a beta patch.

>>3628 Alright. I can hurry those scripts in the next two days.

Posting to notify that I've TLC'd and Edited scripts s004 - s015.

>>3637
I'm reviewing and updating your edits now. Thank you for your work. Please continue.

>>3638 There are only about 5 scripts left. I think I can finish them today, would you like to wait for them before making that beta patch?

>>3647
Finish your edits, and then I'll edit them further and produce a patch. The patch may only be an MSD file as opposed to an installer to simplify support.

>>3648 I've just finished editing them. I might have forgotten to remove some # comments, and I might have missed some words where Takako stutters like "R,Runa" instead of "R-Runa," so hopefully you'd catch them after giving it a run through.

All scripts have been checked.

I need translations for the branches.

Well. Bit of a questionable engine design there.

01
キスをする = Kiss her
反論してみる = Object to it

02
ど、どうかしら = "I, I wonder..."
そうね、素敵だわ = "Yes, they're very lovely"

03
まだまだ怒る = "I'm still mad"
押し倒す = Push her down

04
そんなこと決してないわ！ = "Of course not!"
教師として節度を守りたい = "As a teacher, I have to show some restraint"

05
やんわりと叱る = Scold her gently
きつく叱る = Scold her harshly

Although I'm not yet finished editing the translation scripts (s017 and s018 remain to be reviewed), I've encountered several lines that cause non-fatal errors. Some lines throw a dialog box with an error message, but do not crash the program or play the voice for the line if it has one. I have not been able to reproduce this error reliably, so I would like to ask editors and translators to use the test MSD below and search for such lines in varied environments. In addition, this is also a good opportunity to translation check the edited portion of the script at the same time.

This is an MSD of the translation as of 16 April 2014.

http://axypb.net/pub/MSD9.zip

Make a backup of your MSD file and use the attached MSD in its place. I will replace this link periodically as updates are made to the translation on the wiki. Please do not redistribute this file as it is incomplete.

>>3756
when i played it (with xp compatibility on), as far as correct route, no error was given. everything worked correctly.

Ok a couple of the things with the using the downloaded MSD File, choosing choice 1 or the top choice of the first decision brance you will stubled onto one line on untranslated
See http://imgur.com/w7vKOrz for a screen cap.

Also just before the the untranslated line the word Youre is written YOure, so far the only two things ive stumbled across, ill post any other erorrs i find :)

>>3774
A line from s006 was erroneously deleted during the edit. I've restored it and uploaded the change to the wiki.

I've created a new version of the MSD. The only change was made to this line.

http://axypb.net/pub/MSD9.zip

Ok, going to start testing out the new MSD, thanks AXYPB.

Line 111F1 in scene 8 says "Before long, my mind completely blank." I think it should say "my mind went completely blank instead.

>>3777
The wiki has been updated with this correction. Please continue testing.

I have posted edits for all 18 scripts to the wiki. However, before creating a proper beta patch, there are some commented lines in the wiki that I would like opinions on. Please review the scripts in the wiki and search for comments denoted with #. In addition, there may still be some lines that cause program errors.

This is an MSD of the translation as of 5 May 2014.
http://axypb.net/pub/MSD9.zip

I've made a number of style changes for consistency and other revisions to the script. We are nearing preparation for a beta patch. Please review the changes if you have time.

This is an MSD of the translation as of 15 May 2014.
http://axypb.net/pub/MSD9.zip

>>3796
I've mirrored the MSD here until my website is repaired.
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/el63io35ah91owa/AABMxIe8Prdb9kb75tNQlgQza/Petals%27%20Garden%20Storage/MSD/MSD9.zip

MSD Dropbox link is down.

>>3802
This is a new MSD with changes to the first 7 chapters posted to the wiki on 24 May 2014.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/39466432/Petals%27%20Garden%20Storage/MSD/MSD9.zip

What Runa demands in this scene is unacceptable.

There is a glitch in chapter 8. The line at <10140> makes a reference to a voice file that does not exist, which causes the program to throw a non-fatal error. The file name in the script that is being referred to is misspelled, but my attempts at hacking the MSD file to point to the correct name only caused different, fatal errors. Furthermore, it is not possible to change the name of the voice file in question in the VOICE archive itself. As I continue to search for a way to correct this, I've contacted Proger_XP about this in the hopes that although ArcTool support has ended, he will be able to provide a fixed version of S008.MSD.

But that fatal error is a bug of the game, no of the patch right? Because I have the same problem when I try the japanese version.

>>3856
It isn't a fatal error, but one that still interrupts the flow of the program. It is present in the original version and I am looking into solutions for it that the patch will include.

I have released a beta translation MSD at Cray's Notes.
http://axypb.net/2014/07/02/sweet-grown-kisses-beta-english-translation/

This MSD contains the translation as of 2 July 2014. Ralen did additional translation checking for this release. This patch will be available for one week, after which a release candidate will be issued if no bug reports are submitted.

For those concerned about the status of this patch, I have hesitated on updating it until I receive a fix for the bug mentioned in >>3808. However, it appears that I will not be able to address it in a timely manner. As I have also not received any reports for script corrections or suggestions, and that work on Rikka-Sayuki Theater has concluded, I will begin work on a proper release candidate with graphics patches over the next few days. The final translation patch will leave the bug in place as we are unable to correct it, but should this ever change, a new version will be released as soon as possible.

I've looked into the bug a bit. Problem is, if you change it to the correct filename (which is one character less) it'll shift all the offsets in the script after that line, causing the crash. And there's no way of fixing it without actually understanding the encryption they employed here.

Best thing I could do was this:
http://uqc.me/qfyde

Overwrite S008 in the Japanese MSD with this and then patch with the English script. What this does is referencing one of Takako's generic moans instead. Doesn't fix the original problem but it will at least get rid of the error message and it's hardly the first time voice clips get mixed up in those games.

Nevermind, this bothered me and finding the correct offsets was easier than I thought.

http://uqc.me/bokmh

Replace the original S008 in the Japanese MSD file and not only will it not throw an error, it will also play the correct voice clip.

A small change in the translation script is required for it to compile:

- <10140> 「ん、う……んっ、ぁ……ぅ、おまんこ感じちゃう」=「Nn, uu... nn, aau, my pussy feels good...」

change to:

- <1013F> ・uん、う……んっ、ぁ……ぅ、おまんこ感じちゃう」=「Nn, uu... nn, aau, my pussy feels good...」

>>3967
I have tried this and various other methods to change the file being referenced to no avail. I would also prefer, if possible, a blank dummy file be referenced instead of a voice from a different character.

Additionally, your link returns error 403.

>>3969
See >>3968

>>3970
Excellent work. I've produced an MSD with this fix merged in and uploaded it to the wiki. The text is otherwise unchanged.
http://axypb.net/2014/07/02/sweet-grown-kisses-beta-english-translation/

For convenience, I've also uploaded the original Japanese MSD with the fix.
http://axypb.net/pub/MSD9_FIX.zip

While I was inserting text into the ending credits, I noticed that the copy of sr02 I received from NaAaF has very different colors from the original (see >>2893). I will try to correct this in the final release, but if possible, I would like for NaAaF to post the PSD used in the creation of the clean image.

Please verify that the translation credits are correct.

I think you should thanks Phyis for fixing the problem wit the scene 8.

>>4038
I added Phyis as a patching credit.

This is the first proper release candidate of the complete patch. I would still like to correct the colors for >>4029 before final release. Please test the graphics in this package and ensure none of them have been missed.
http://axypb.net/pub/SH9_en_RC1.exe

As no issues have been reported for the release candidate, the final version will be released within 48 hours.

I'd like to make a last request for a clean-up of sr02 for the final release.
>>2893

>>4087
Sure, I can clean this up. Expect this either later today or tomorrow.

>>4088
Would you like a graphics credit?

>>4089
No, that's fine. I just wanted to contribute so that others can finally play this game.

>>4090
Thank you very much. The translation patch will be released later today.

The translation has been released. Congratulations to everyone who worked on it.
http://petalsgarden.axypb.net/english-translation-kiss-petals-sweet-grown-kisses/

Many, many, many thanks.
By the way, are you going to finish Lily Platinum now, before Maidens of Michael?
Maidens of Michael seems to be quite a large project, but Lily Platinum has 110 comments or so, so I assume that it's nearing its completion.

>>4090
I'd like for you to clean the equivalent page for Lily Platinum as well.

>>4097
And done.

>>4185
Thank you. Please stand by as I may require more cleanups for the Ren'Py project in >>4064.

Can anyone give me a download link for the japanese patch? i tried everything on listless but every time i tried installing it on playonmac it says an error has occurred. i really want to play this game. i tried both of the mirror too but nothing is working. help me

can anyone please help me i tried installing the game but at the end it always says "POL_System_unzip failed with error 1" what do i do? and if i tried using the english patch it says "Error in POL_wine WIne seem to have crashed" please help i really want to play this game.

>>4432
If you are using Wine with these visual novels, use this tool to convert the data archives: http://vn.i-forge.net/tools/#sono+hanabira+ni+kuchizuke+wo%C2%B1+linux+wine+fix