>>4550
Nice, thanks.
Can you change the title:
From tomorrow on no more alcohol =>
From tomorrow on no more drinking
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Dovey Lovey =>
Lovey Dovey
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Fiends =>
Friends
"Yuina ♡" is missing. Maybe make the font of "Madoka ♡", "Mari ♡", "Yuina ♡" and "Friends" unique. (more flashy like labels on a photo)
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drunk play... =>
from the alcohol's influence...
that's why I hate it. =>
so it has to stop.
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"Hey!" and "Eeh?" don't have to be rotated that much, and "Eeh?" should be rotated counter-clockwise towards Yuina.