Translation of first part.

And translation of second part.

The NTR tag sorta caught my attention, lol. I'd really like to do this one.

As a safety measure however, for my own and everyone else's sake, I'm gonna give myself a deadline. So if I'm not done with this within a month's time (as of September 22nd), it's up for grabs again.

Are the two parts meant to be released separately or as a whole?

>>4056
Sweet. They should be released together (2 is better imo).

Will do qc when I get a chance. Thanks so much for the hard work Phyis

>>4131
Think you caught the wrong topic ... But never fear, you may look this one over too if you want!

http://www67.zippyshare.com/v/31281210/file.html

The deadline was a good idea. Think I'll keep doing it that way. I work better under a little pressure.

Also, didn't catch the name of the raw provider o/

>>4138
The raw provider is WeatheredPeach.

S'pose I'll just upload the edited credits page for the time being.

>>4152
Page 6
Kanako's Senpai was licking off [Kanako's sweat].

Page 10
How am I supposed to do all this =>
How can I do all this

Page 13
I remember well. =>
etched firmly in my memory.

Page 14
And I... felt strangely aroused. =>
And I... felt an arousal as heavy I never thought possible.

The part of me that arousal was coming from =>
For feeling so aroused...

I wish I could /kill/, but there was nothing I could do. =>
I could /kill/ myself, but there was nothing I could do.

>>4169

>>Kanako's Senpai was licking off [Kanako's sweat].

I kinda felt that "sweat" was redundant, as it was already implied in the previous box...

Anyway, all changes made.

http://www50.zippyshare.com/v/45096729/file.html

>>4171

>I kinda felt that "sweat" was redundant, as it was already implied in the previous box...

That's a good point, the emphasis is on "toweled off" and then on "licked off" so reading it like that, "licked off hers" does sound better.

Well, ya got both pages (unless you want me to upload the older one again), so pick the one that works best.

Also, regarding that one line on page 14 -

>>I could /kill/ myself, but there was nothing I could do.

Although I might just be a bit anal about this, but she says that she "could do something" and then that she "couldn't do anything" in the same sentence, which creates a discrepancy. So I suggest an alternative.

>>4188

>I could /kill/ myself, but there was nothing I could do.
>Although I might just be a bit anal about this, but she says that she "could do something" and then that she "couldn't do anything" in the same sentence, which creates a discrepancy. So I suggest an alternative.

Yeah, totally.
I wanted to /kill/ myself, but there was nothing I could do.

Dust markup: http://uqc.me/yqkih

pg 5:

• "s?f" the hell is that sfx?
• Lower panel could use more selective black leveling for the clothes, there's quite a bit burned out

pg 21: "When you invited" and "I was amazed" a bit up

pg 24:

• "Girls are carnivores." I think "predators" or the original "wolves" would work better to convey the hunter/prey meaning, carnivores doesn't mean a lot in this context.

Oh and could you tell me what that font is on the first page in the 3rd and 4th bubble?

>>4190

>pg 5:
>"s?f" the hell is that sfx?

It should be する - Slide.

>pg 24:
>"Girls are carnivores." I think "predators" or the original "wolves" would work better to convey the hunter/prey meaning, carnivores doesn't mean a lot in this context.

All right, 'wolves' then.

>>4190

>>"s?f" the hell is that sfx?

I wrote it as "shf" to make it a more sound-effect-y version of "slide", which I didn't feel fit very well as she's only brushing away Kanako's hair with her hand.

>>4192

>>Oh and could you tell me what that font is on the first page in the 3rd and 4th bubble?

CCCheekyMonkey. I've used it for all the shout bubbles.

http://www62.zippyshare.com/v/74915515/file.html

Newest version.

I am absolutely delighting in the comments section at Dynasty Reader.

That is all.

I'd been waiting for this one ever since I noticed it, thanks for the hard work! The transition between the parts seemed confusing since they started with almost the same page yet it wasn't split into two chapters (over at Dynasty). Odd there wasn't a "to be continued" in the original.

>>4222
Masochist.

It's not just Dynasty, either. There's some super delicious tears being shed over on /u/ too. Methinks the soft hearted losers are projecting into Ayaka.

https://boards.4chan.org/u/thread/1597863

You snooze you lose, Beta-chan.

>Be beautiful senpai at clubs day

>see a qt 3.14 with her friend
>love_at_first_sight.jpeg,
>get qt 3.14 to join club and become kouhai

>spend time, learn stuff about her
>she's having troubles with the childhood friend/our love rival
>find out friend's a pussy and hasn't made any moves
>lust_overdrive.exe, become alpha!senpai
>...
>kouhai claimed
>this sexytimes club now

...

>one day, liplocking with kouhai
>notice the friend/former love rival watching
>that's right bitch, you had her for years, she mine now
>gokigenyou out

That comment. I am in tears. XD

>>4245

>super delicious tears
>soft hearted losers
>Beta

Kek
Say Anon-kun, how can one become as edgy and hardcore as you?