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Thanks.
Page 3 (foreword)
since last winter's book hasn't it? =>
since last winter's book, hasn't it?
Hello I am Sakurairo Gorakubu. =>
Hello, I am Kiryuu Masumi.
"Original"...is what I thought =>
"An original"...is what I thought
Akira treatment =>
Akira's treatment
Page 4
The break in sempai is missing a dash.
It can't be helped, I'll just have to take that frustration out on Akari... =>
It can't be helped, I'll just have to take that frustration out on Akari-chan...
Page 6
“Feelings�...maybe Passion would be a better word. =>
Though things looks pretty lusty now...
Well whatever it is, it doesn't look very peaceful. =>
Don't watch it like it's normal!
But hey... =>
Hey, remember?
This air is kind of making me feel... =>
This is kind of getting me in the mood...
Page 8
You say I can't? so what are you going to do, Yui? =>
Yes, I guess you're right. So, what now, Yui?
(teasing)
"You dummy..." <-- all text should be horizontal
Page 11
Are you feeling scared Yui? =>
Mmm, getting perky ♪ Are you aroused, Yui?
Page 12
My fingers are a little moist. =>
You've moistened my fingers a little.
Page 14
I think you'll enjoy it most this way. =>
I think you'll enjoy this the most ♪
Page 18
Yui, your missing out... => (ã‚ãµã‚Œã‚‹)
It's because... you're overflowing so much, Yui...
Page 19
Ooh... it feels so good! =>
Ooh... it feels so good! I can't stop! (horizontal)
Page 21
Today is the day you really get to hear what I have to say! =>
Today is the day you really gonna make you listen to what I have to say!
I think yelling should be enough Ayano-chan. =>
You're too excited, Ayano-chan.
Tsk. =>
Um...
What’s this supposed to be =>
What's this atmosphere...
The tea room is all pink... =>
Like a pink cloud hangs in the tea room...
What... =>
I...
Looks like there's a couple in there really being intimate…this pink is almost like cherry blossoms. =>
This cherry-blossom pink feeling means there's a couple being intimate in here.
Page 22
This is the afterword. =>
The afterword already.